AP:438-476 Know your faults and keep your wits
If you ever read Quintilius anything,
he’d say:
‘Oh do change this, and
this.’ If, after two or three
Vain attempts, you could do
no better, he’d order
Deletion: ‘return the
ill-made verse to the anvil’.
If you chose to defend your
fault rather than change it,
He’d spend not another word
or useless effort
To stop you loving you, and
yours, unrivalled, alone.
An honest, sensible man will
condemn lifeless verse,
Fault the harsh, smear the
inelegant with a black
Stroke of the pen, cut out
pretentious adornment,
Force you to elucidate where
it’s not clear enough,
Denounce the ambiguous
phrase, mark amendments,
Be an Aristarchus: not say:
‘Why should I offend
A friend for a trifle?’ Such
trifles lead to serious
Trouble, once he’s been
laughed at, or badly received.
The sensible fear to touch,
they flee, a crazy poet,
As when the evil itch, or
jaundice, plagues someone,
Or fanatical delusions, or
plain lunacy,
Diana’s curse:
children rashly follow and tease him.
He, inspired, goes wandering
off, spouting his verses,
And if like a fowler intent
on blackbirds, he falls
Into a well, or a pit,
however much he cries:
‘Help me, citizens!’ none
will bother to pull him out.
If anyone did choose to
help, and let down a rope,
I’d say: ‘Who knows if he
didn’t do that on purpose,
And doesn’t want to be
saved?’ and I’ll tell the tale
Of the Sicilian poet’s
death, how Empedocles
Keen to be an immortal god,
coolly leapt into
Burning Etna. Grant
poets the power and right to kill
Themselves: who saves one,
against his will, murders him.
It’s not his first time,
nor, if he’s rescued will he
Become human now, and stop
craving fame in death.
It’s not too clear why he
keeps on making verses.
Has he desecrated ancestral
ashes, disturbed
A sad spot struck by
lightning, sacrilegiously? Yes,
He’s mad: like a bear, that’s
broken the bars of its cage
The pest puts all to flight,
learned or not, with reciting:
Whom he takes tight hold of,
he grips, and reads to death,
A leech that nev er looses the skin, till gorged with blood.
Disturbing. I like it.
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ReplyDeleteSo this took on an entirely different meaning since I have been working on my writing, and now I just want to delete delete delete everything.
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